How it all began...
Far at the brink of vision,
orange and grey churn,
amidst the greatest of creation,
rose the illuminous one.
As one ponders
over the world as a maze,
he charms us wonder of wonders!
with a brilliant tinge of saffron haze!
Softly, sternly, he glides afar,
gently and firmly he defeats the night,
in the distance blinks the star,
should it stay? Or give up the fight??
He kisses the flowers, caresses the buds,
and smiles at the blessed ones,
'thou art his, his own, the Lord's,
who loves all and none he shuns'.
He smiles, laughs, sighs and fades
he blushes as the earth glances
He muses as he genly fades,
'How the ocean's love for its droplets enhances...'
'How its love formed a ripple,
in the fathomless terrain,
and the fallen droplets - how fickle,
the meanders have a lot to learn...'
Love is not made to stay! Love is not love until its given away!!
Ahem ;)
ReplyDeleteWelcome to the place where u were born to belong... quite late tho... :) the blog is just preethi like... n the about me... my! i dont think u left any of ur favs... he hee... loved it... n the post lovely man... u wrote it today esply 4 d blog?! it has all begun grt ;)
on 2nd thots - poetry always - no not alwys - quite mny times has many interpretations... so to clear my dbt - wat xactly did u mean by the below... cdnt get the link...
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ps. lucky me?! the poet is stil alive - so no debates :P
hey remember Nivedita dash's prayer talk where she said that god is like an ocean and he just seperated us from himself to love himself better? ....so....assuming we are the droplets and he is the ocean - i wrote that line:-) got it?
ReplyDeleteLoved the poem ... Ur indeed a serious threat to sulo badri ;)
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